"Not what a guy wants to hear when you're scanning him, Jack," Logan replied, watching the other man as he worked. "What's it saying?"
Jack seemed so confident when he worked- It was a confidence younger Logan envied. He wanted that. He wanted to carry himself the way Jack did.
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"Not what a guy wants to hear when you're scanning him, Jack," Logan replied, watching the other man as he worked. "What's it saying?"
Jack seemed so confident when he worked- It was a confidence younger Logan envied. He wanted that. He wanted to carry himself the way Jack did.